First attempt at my hype vid- Thoughts?

All the clips I've had to take with my phone and then merge them together lol, which explains the pretty poor quality, but overall I thought it went alright :)
Thoughts and criticisms appreciated :)|||Nice job man the scence cuts and the music give it an old school feel. I like it. Have you looked into getting a capture card? There pretty inexpensive.|||Yeah, I've got a dazzle, but for whatever reason it doesn't want to work on my pc. I can record stuff, but the speed and signal quality is terrible. This was just a temporary fix until I can be bothered to get it working lol.|||Overall not bad. I'd suggest when using a digital camera or phone to record video turning off all other lights as you get a weird dot on the screen. Also trying to keep the screen itself as full as possible it another thing. You did a good job but there were a few clips where I could see the frame of your tv and the highlight looks a little off.
Other than that for a first attempt good job. Don't fall into the typical pitfall of using TONS of transitions thinking they need them. You did good here but don't let them run your video thinking you need to fit these cool transitions in. But again overall Great job. Keep up the effort with these we need more community members actively making hype videos.